She walked to the wall crying yet again. She wrote down her feelings of sorrow on the small slip of paper and put it on the wailing wall. She cried her eyes out for another few minutes then went back to June, Lily, Rosaleen, and Neil in the kitchen.
She noticed the burnt pancake in the trash and that lily was gone she started to hum "oh! susanna" which made June come and comfort her. Neil left after eating a pancake as May finally calmed down. June went to go practice her cello leaving May alone in the kitchen.
She started making another pancake as she thought about what lily might be doing and if she would want another pancake.
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feelings of sorrow was a great way to describe it instead of saying she was sad or something
ReplyDeleteYou described all of it in a nice and sophisticated way, such as she cried her eyes out.
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